okay, looks good, I have two remaining changes that I think would be good:
One, emphasize the “you must work on your bike…” sentence – bold italic underline, something.
Two, add “type” to the bike info section. I like that the bike info section is now more accesible to be filled out by the EAB person rather than the staffer. However I still think the type field is needed. The purpose of the bike info section is for us to be able to identify the bike in the shop. Sometimes the tags get switched or fall off. It is very helpful in these cases to know whether the bike is a road bike, mountain bike, cruiser, etc. Maybe a new line:
Type (circle one) road bike mountain hybrid cruiser 3 spd kids
Version 12 (odf) is not opening correctly in microsoft word. I am going to print a small number of version 13 without these changes and bring them to the shop. I can only print small runs at my office anyway.